"Even then, the cigarettes still sell."
The tense is mixed.
Either "Even so" or "still sold" will fix it.
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In Never's office, when looking at the dresser picture...
"It's a autographed picture of those guys from the iPod commercial."
Should be "an".
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In the mine drill, linking the Control Panel...
"You lather up some saliva and... smother it all over the control panel? Do I really have to read every line of dialogue? I'm sure we can afford to cut some of this out of the game."
Should be "slather".
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In the Break Room...
The "Refridgerator" object should be called "Refrigerator".
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In the Lab, talking to the Bird...
"I beg your pardon for my less-than-adequate brother, sir. It would appear the distribution of our brain cells was not exactly homologous, if you know what I mean."
Wrong word, "commensurate", maybe?
If yer gonna make it polly-syllabic to sound smart, use the right verbiage. Heh.
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In the mental living room, looking at Slash...
After swapping toys, the description still says he's playing with a wagon.
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In the mental monolith Break Room...
No 'Hamster in the Microwave' comment? For shame.
Day of the Tentacle was by Lucas Arts, so I guess it's excusable.
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In the head room, looking at the melty photo on the right...
Wow, I didn't realize how similar the Kerona acid shower was to the Ortega lava bath.
I was soo ready to call "Hey that's SQ3!" until I checked both games.
No problem there.
