Beach Resort Clerk sketch

[mjomble]

At first, his skin was supposed to be yellow, but the picture seemed a bit too human, so I made another version where he's a bit greener.

[pcj]

Nice sketch, though as I've already pointed out, it's missing a nametag.

Perhaps in a different (alien) language so you don't have to come up with a name.

Oh, and I do prefer the greenish one.


Edit by Justas: The nametag thing is just a note for Kain, I won't be redoing the sketch if no other changes are suggested.

[MartyMcFly]

how about a sun visor instead of that hat? whatever is easy though

[olzen]

Still using the wrong stubble, are ya? Try to see if you can use the one on my original sketch below. The one on yours makes him look too old.



Otherwise, good job.

[mjomble]

Still using the wrong stubble, are ya?

I did make it much less dense than it was before.

Try to see if you can use the one on my original sketch below.

It's a bit difficult to make it out from that sketch. That big, bold, black, upside-down-U-shaped thing on his lower face, is that supposed to be his beard? It's much different from the rest of what appears to be facial hair and I see no mouth, so it might also look as if the big thing was a frickin' big mouth or something. Maybe you could do a close-up sketch of that?

[olzen]

It was supposed to be his mouth. The small lines on and around it are the stubble. As for the colour, go with the greener one.

[mjomble]

Shrnjumble!

[pcj]

The one on yours makes him look too old.

And yet, he still has grayish hair.

Still, I like the new "lite stubble" look.

[mjomble]

And yet, he still has grayish hair.

It's more dark-blue-ish. He also has green skin, which might be considered a sign of expiration if he was a human. Though he isn't.

[pcj]

Well, fine then, it's blue-grayish.